Model Composition - An unexpected event at a picnic
When it comes to storytelling, the rising action is a crucial component that often goes unnoticed by students. The rising action serves...
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Edward Kwan
May 205 min read
Model Composition - Regret
Motivating students to use better language is daunting - despite the scaffolding, some simply choose not to do so, prefering to coast by....
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Edward Kwan
Apr 244 min read
Model Composition - A mistake
“Finally, I’m home! I’m starving.” Tossing my bag aside, I made a beeline for the kitchen, my stomach rumbling like the roar of a...
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Edward Kwan
Apr 24 min read
Model Composition - Something that was forgotten
"Linus, I'm really really sorry," I muttered, wringing my hands as an overwhleming sense of guilt consumed me. However, my words were...
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Edward Kwan
Mar 131 min read
A Primer on Show, Don't Tell - Worry / Concern
1. "This is troubling," I whispered, a wave of unease washing over me as I glanced around the room for reassurance. 2. "How can this be?"...
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Edward Kwan
Mar 105 min read
Model Composition - Write about a time when you were on a holiday
"I told you that shortcut was a bad idea! We were supposed to be in Kanazawa, and now look where we are," my mother chided, the worry...
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Edward Kwan
Feb 212 min read
A Primer of Show, Don't Tell - Fear
I have been exploring this on Facebook Some students are still looking for more examples to guide them along on this journey so here's a...
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Edward Kwan
Jan 284 min read
Model Composition - Being Responsible
Written by A Edited by Mr Kwan “Tom, I’m leaving now! Don’t let anyone in,” Mother reminded. Just before stepping out the door, Mother...
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Edward Kwan
Sep 6, 20232 min read
Mastering PSLE-Tested Verbs of Perception: Adventures in Seeing, Hearing, and Spotting
Ahoy, young language adventurers! Today, we're setting off on a thrilling expedition into the world of verbs of perception, with a...
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Edward Kwan
Aug 29, 20232 min read
Let's Explore Magical "If" Sentences: The Three Conditionals Made Simple for Primary School Wizards!
Hey there, young word wizards! Today, we're diving into the enchanting world of grammar with a special focus on "If" sentences, also...
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Edward Kwan
Aug 27, 20231 min read
How to avoid mediocre compositions
In the world of storytelling, whether it's a gripping novel, a thrilling movie, or an engrossing TV series, one crucial element that...
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Edward Kwan
Aug 24, 20232 min read
Model Composition - A mistake
Language is the heartbeat of any captivating story, breathing life into the imagination of both the writer and the reader. It serves as...
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Edward Kwan
Jun 16, 20231 min read
Description Boost #1 - Camping
Using the 5W1H approach in writing often results in dry and flavourless sentences. Using that as the guideline, it's not uncommon to see...
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Edward Kwan
Jun 1, 20233 min read
Can there be too much vocabulary in your composition?
For those who want a wonderfully written section sprinkled with language and literary devices, this is not it. This is a one stuffed...
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Edward Kwan
Feb 4, 20231 min read
Commonly tested composition themes
Getting prepared for Continuous Writing in Paper 1 is not as scary as you think. Have an overview of the potential questions. - they are...
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Edward Kwan
Jan 3, 20231 min read
Taking time to flesh out the climax
One of the biggest mistakes students make is rushing through the story. They form points using 5W1H but they are reluctant or forget to...
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Edward Kwan
Dec 9, 20222 min read
Composition for Primary 1-3 (Lost Wallet)
This will be useful to help your child pick up the basics of story flow - to understand how the introduction transits into the problem. ...
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